To the still Unknown Her
A sequel to this, inspired by these beautiful eyes
I dont know why,
But strangely sometimes
My eyes handle one-way traffic.
Some people, only get in.
And you have reached the furthest.
I know its cozy in there.
But I only wish you stay there forever.
You are not the end of my world.
Times will change, and who knows,
I might even live happily without you.
But you know? I am a content man.
I know this has hit you off-balance,
I am selfish, 'cos I told you.
But I would be stupid, if I hadn't.
As I gaze into your eyes,
That had forgot to wink
With tears brimming, I tell you
I cannot swim my way in.
Please make way for me, and
Just open your eyes, to let me in.
And I would close mine.
P.S: This is not a poem by any means. The line breaks were given only for the pause.
But strangely sometimes
My eyes handle one-way traffic.
Some people, only get in.
And you have reached the furthest.
I know its cozy in there.
But I only wish you stay there forever.
You are not the end of my world.
Times will change, and who knows,
I might even live happily without you.
But you know? I am a content man.
I know this has hit you off-balance,
I am selfish, 'cos I told you.
But I would be stupid, if I hadn't.
As I gaze into your eyes,
That had forgot to wink
With tears brimming, I tell you
I cannot swim my way in.
Please make way for me, and
Just open your eyes, to let me in.
And I would close mine.
P.S: This is not a poem by any means. The line breaks were given only for the pause.
19 Comments:
hmm..pheelings!!!!
I wish you get to enter those eyes.(ofcourse into the still unknown's eyes) :-)
Anyways, romba pheel pannatha..nallathu illai..athuvum innaiku
HAPPY BIRTHDAY Buddy - Have a Blast.
thanks da...
idhu kamalinee kanna paatha oru effect... mathabadi no personal 'pheelings'
Happy Birthday Balaji!
It might not be a poem..but is definitely romantically poetic! very unlike of the club you belong to...
But, understandable..as you grow older, andha club ai vittu vandhu dhaane aaganum :-)
Yadhvi,
Thanks for the wishes....
Enna dhaan sangathula irundhalum... kamalinee madhiri yarayaavadhu paatha... indha madhiri aagaradhu undu
Happy Birthday Balaji :) Seekrame kamalinee madhiri goodu wifu kedaikka praapthirasthu :)
Ferrari,
Thanks for the wishes and blessings :)
Bala, un neranju manasuku....adhe madhiri onnu ponnu kidaika vaalthukkal !
Btw Happy Bday.
Hi Balaji
Many more happy returns of the day.
P'kar,
Thanks machi
Swami,
Thanks
Birthday ah? Appie Budday !
And yes, beautiful post ! :)
Ramya,
Thanks
Balaji,
Ur title is awesome..
ur inspirational person is even better(i am happy in a way)
Fantastic post on ur bday..
Adhutha varsham kalyana sapadhu with a babe like Kamini
ok va???
Nirmal,
Thanks... it is actually a sequel. "I know what you did last summer"... "I still know what you did last summer"...
madhiri...
A small correction... she is kamalinee
And one more thing... ok va-nu kekkara??? kamalinee madhiri ponnu kedacha yaravadhu venaam-nu solvaangala???
It's your birthday? Have a lovely day. Many happy returns.
Lovely non-poem, though you could have lost several commas.
Bravo.
paati mathiri irukka,andha heroine.
Lalitha,
thanks...
sheks,
irundhuttu pogattum... :p
blogsurya,
thanks.........
u must be a mindreader..otherwise how could have u written my mind with this precision....
never mind....i excuse u this time....
jokes apart...a great tribute to the mesmerizing eyes
Brat,
Thanks for the compliments... keep visting here
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