Wednesday, August 30, 2006

To the still Unknown Her

A sequel to this, inspired by these beautiful eyes

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I dont know why,
But strangely sometimes
My eyes handle one-way traffic.
Some people, only get in.
And you have reached the furthest.
I know its cozy in there.
But I only wish you stay there forever.

You are not the end of my world.
Times will change, and who knows,
I might even live happily without you.
But you know? I am a content man.
I know this has hit you off-balance,
I am selfish, 'cos I told you.
But I would be stupid, if I hadn't.

As I gaze into your eyes,
That had forgot to wink
With tears brimming, I tell you
I cannot swim my way in.
Please make way for me, and
Just open your eyes, to let me in.
And I would close mine.

P.S: This is not a poem by any means. The line breaks were given only for the pause.

20 Comments:

Blogger srivat said...

hmm..pheelings!!!!
I wish you get to enter those eyes.(ofcourse into the still unknown's eyes) :-)

Anyways, romba pheel pannatha..nallathu illai..athuvum innaiku

HAPPY BIRTHDAY Buddy - Have a Blast.

10:30 PM  
Blogger b a l a j i said...

thanks da...

idhu kamalinee kanna paatha oru effect... mathabadi no personal 'pheelings'

10:32 PM  
Blogger Yadhvi said...

Happy Birthday Balaji!
It might not be a poem..but is definitely romantically poetic! very unlike of the club you belong to...
But, understandable..as you grow older, andha club ai vittu vandhu dhaane aaganum :-)

11:59 PM  
Blogger b a l a j i said...

Yadhvi,

Thanks for the wishes....

Enna dhaan sangathula irundhalum... kamalinee madhiri yarayaavadhu paatha... indha madhiri aagaradhu undu

12:06 AM  
Anonymous F e r r a r i said...

Happy Birthday Balaji :) Seekrame kamalinee madhiri goodu wifu kedaikka praapthirasthu :)

2:00 AM  
Blogger b a l a j i said...

Ferrari,
Thanks for the wishes and blessings :)

2:03 AM  
Blogger Peelamedu_bulls said...

Bala, un neranju manasuku....adhe madhiri onnu ponnu kidaika vaalthukkal !
Btw Happy Bday.

2:14 AM  
Anonymous From a silent reader said...

Hi Balaji

Many more happy returns of the day.

2:38 AM  
Blogger b a l a j i said...

P'kar,
Thanks machi

Swami,
Thanks

2:46 AM  
Blogger Ramya said...

Birthday ah? Appie Budday !
And yes, beautiful post ! :)

6:36 AM  
Blogger b a l a j i said...

Ramya,
Thanks

6:43 AM  
Blogger NIRMAL said...

Balaji,
Ur title is awesome..
ur inspirational person is even better(i am happy in a way)


Fantastic post on ur bday..

Adhutha varsham kalyana sapadhu with a babe like Kamini
ok va???

7:34 AM  
Blogger b a l a j i said...

Nirmal,

Thanks... it is actually a sequel. "I know what you did last summer"... "I still know what you did last summer"...
madhiri...

A small correction... she is kamalinee

And one more thing... ok va-nu kekkara??? kamalinee madhiri ponnu kedacha yaravadhu venaam-nu solvaangala???

8:53 AM  
Blogger Lalita Mukherjea said...

It's your birthday? Have a lovely day. Many happy returns.

Lovely non-poem, though you could have lost several commas.

Bravo.

2:44 AM  
Blogger Sheks said...

paati mathiri irukka,andha heroine.

2:30 AM  
Blogger b a l a j i said...

Lalitha,
thanks...

sheks,
irundhuttu pogattum... :p

8:34 PM  
Blogger blogSurya said...

Dei,
Unnoda b'day vaa...da
sorry kekkamatein..as a friend have rights to forget it..i guess.

I remember last time, i wished you on stroke of 12'...forgive me this time around.

Many Many Happy returns of the day.

Its a BIG world and these is no scarcity for true LOVE mate.
You keep giving it and one day you would find it back with loads.

4:33 AM  
Blogger b a l a j i said...

blogsurya,
thanks.........

8:26 AM  
Anonymous Bharath said...

u must be a mindreader..otherwise how could have u written my mind with this precision....
never mind....i excuse u this time....
jokes apart...a great tribute to the mesmerizing eyes

1:16 PM  
Blogger b a l a j i said...

Brat,
Thanks for the compliments... keep visting here

6:14 PM  

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